whiteroses

Ocean View

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  I saw your picture on that beach and it reminded me of where I would love to be. 
Remembering the deep ocean blue.
As the sunsets, kalieding of jade into the abyss.
 
In the cool of the night 
In the warmth of the winds, 
   And so love begins 
  
I was thinking...it doesn't get any better than paradise. 
  
Remembering the sounds of the waves as tides roll in. 
Clutched hand in hand.
Barefoot and tanned. 
  
Not a sole in sight, 
  
I was thinking...it doesn't get any better than paradise 
  
It was all such the perfect vision. 
All I could see was the beauty I could feel. 
And it felt so real 
  
And so I thought as I closed my eyes,"it just doesn't get any better than paradise" 
  
I see your picture on the beach and it is reminding me, of how much I would love to be there with you.
 
Remembering the fall of the night. 
When the stars had began to fade and when the sun had begun to rise. 
And then, when everything comes into view. 
 ...I wiped the sand and a tear from my eye. 
My perfect vision was only a dream,
  
I had dreamt of you 
  
I saw your picture 
  

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• s-zaynab-kamoonpury

  Thu Jun 20 17:49:25 UTC 2019
  Plz do write your thoughts on any of my two newest poems. I like to know other people's thoughts as to my subject matter ESP.